Great Presentation! :) I believe you guys did a really thorough research for your presentation topic.
Overview: -very beautiful slides and the content of the presentation were really really useful.The pacing of the presentation was fine, i was able to keep up with it.
@Hwee Teng: demonstrated confidence during presentation and was able to effectively deliver ideas to the audience. A picture speaks a thousand words, showing pictures of right and wrong examples of interview attire is more interesting than listing down the details. Brownie points for that :D
@Mark: i agree that panel interview was important and it's a pity that it wasn't presented due to time constraints. Nonetheless, thanks for all your efforts in going through the details regarding the interview with us. It was useful. Just a suggestion, perhaps for your future presentations, you might want to consider prioritizing your points and be a little bit more concise, so that each presenter gets a equal amount of presentation time at the end of the day. =)
@Zoe: good voice projection, your bubbly and cheerful expression demonstrated enthusiasm and you've brighten up the whole atmosphere. :) I can sense your nervousness, but its a common problem for many people (including myself), both of us will need to practice more before each presentation.
Hi people, it is a pity you didn't have time to talk about the all important panel interview at the end of the class activity.
ReplyDeleteMaybe Brad will say something about that in class. But panel interviews are the most stressful.
CHeers
Hi Hwee Teng,
ReplyDeleteIt was a good presentation overall, except for two points.
1) Zoe fumbled quite a bit, probably down to nerves.
2) Mark used words that were difficult to understand at times.
Cheers,
Jake
Individual
ReplyDeleteHwee Teng:
• Clear about objectives
• May want to vary tone
Mark:
• Explains thoroughly and clearly
• Sometimes too long-winded
Zoe:
• Good projection
• Quite nervous
Group
• Nice presentation slides
• Good projection of voices
• Good class activity with good answers
hope my comments will help you guys. (:
ReplyDeleteDear all,
ReplyDeleteGreat Presentation! :)
I believe you guys did a really thorough research for your presentation topic.
Overview:
-very beautiful slides and the content of the presentation were really really useful.The pacing of the presentation was fine, i was able to keep up with it.
@Hwee Teng: demonstrated confidence during presentation and was able to effectively deliver ideas to the audience. A picture speaks a thousand words, showing pictures of right and wrong examples of interview attire is more interesting than listing down the details.
Brownie points for that :D
@Mark: i agree that panel interview was important and it's a pity that it wasn't presented due to time constraints. Nonetheless, thanks for all your efforts in going through the details regarding the interview with us. It was useful. Just a suggestion, perhaps for your future presentations, you might want to consider prioritizing your points and be a little bit more concise, so that each presenter gets a equal amount of presentation time at the end of the day. =)
@Zoe: good voice projection, your bubbly and cheerful expression demonstrated enthusiasm and you've brighten up the whole atmosphere. :) I can sense your nervousness, but its a common problem for many people (including myself), both of us will need to practice more before each presentation.
Good job ppl! (*thumbs up)
Warmest Regards,
Cynthia :P